I think that your target audience is really realistic and I like that you are going to use a photograph with props which I think will work really well.
Loving the title. Dunno why. Didn't even know it was a type of drum. Quite a nice pitch. Not much to say. Gonna stop now. Yeah.
Quite a small target audience, but it is realistic. The bold fonts could look very good, but don't over do it. Overall a good magazine pitch.
I think that your target audience is really realistic and I like that you are going to use a photograph with props which I think will work really well.
ReplyDeleteLoving the title. Dunno why. Didn't even know it was a type of drum. Quite a nice pitch. Not much to say. Gonna stop now. Yeah.
ReplyDeleteQuite a small target audience, but it is realistic. The bold fonts could look very good, but don't over do it. Overall a good magazine pitch.
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